like Chase1204 said....
....not enough bass. l liked the drums, they sounded nice, but there were a few things l didn't like. At 0:58, that organ (or watever it was) sounded out of place, and completely random. It wasn't used throughout the rest of the piece again, making it sound even more random. And the cowbell (or watever it was) That came in at around a minute, after awhile it just became very annoying. So yeah, 4/10, 2/5.
nice build up.
l really liked the use of those guitar-sounding-things (l forget the name of them). Some songs that have a build-up like this do it all too quickly, but this was nice and slow. As you introduced more instruments and sounds to it it really built up the feeling of it (hence the term BUILD-UP :P ). But this was nice.
The plucks? yeah.
Very few of my songs Don't have that.
ah how sweet.
....but won't this make your current flame angry?.....
Anyway, l really liked this. The melody was very smooth and calming. Someone gave a 0/5, idk who, but it doesn't deserve that. They obviously don't know wat real music is. This song kind of has a feeling of longing, but it isn't really sad. Like l said, l like it.
hmm....
It's the same thing through the whole song, basically the only thing to change is the beat. It could use a melody, and for a remix, it sounded kinda simple. 5/10, 2/5.
lol
It sounded scary and mysterious until the end. That little girl scream kind ruined it, made it more funny than scary. Anywho, l kinda like the name, 'Steelstalker'.
I dunno, just kinda sounds nifty. But my guess is it's about, i dunno, a STALKER? And at the end he maybe gets caught or kills someone? idk.
Haha, I was trying to figure out how to make it scary while still delivering the message. Perhaps a blood splatter would work better? =P
I guess I'll just have to find out when I edit it.
YES
Awesome. if l could make just one suggestion, it would be that the drums could have a smoother intro. But l loved it. Espescially when you had all the sounds going at once, but it still sounded good. 10/10, 5/5, and SmAcK onto my favs.
Yea, it's hard to get perfect.
hmm...
Maybe for percussion, you could just use clapping, or stomping. I can see this being used in a movie or a game though. And it's just a little bit catchy...
It was very nice.
however, it was also very short, and it really didn't have a climax to it, or any form of a build in the middle. The dynamics didn't have any feeling to them, and you can't call any music 'heartfelt' unless you have strong dynamics. Also, the piano itself was very simple, the chords didn't really have any complexity to them. 5/10, 2/5.
nice.
Like others have said, very catchy. l'm sure that lots of newgrounders will create games and movies to put this in. Goin' SmAcK onto my favs.
T_T
SADNESS..........
Really sad message you got going there. I like how the song didn't really ever stay the same, it had several different feelings to it at different points in the song.
I'll tell you wat, make a happier song, and I'll smack this onto my fav list.
Hehehe, I'm sorry :( most of my songs carry somewhat of a sad undertone. And I honestly can't figure out why.
Thank you for the review! :D
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