Excellent.
The only problem I see is that about the 16th or 17th time it repeats through, it gets just a tad bit repetitive and annoying. Perhaps a bit more variety?Other than that, this is a beautiful ambient/house song, and I love it. Great work, keep it up.
----In the years since writing this, every time this song comes up in a playlist I love listening to it. 5/5, forget what I said about it being too repeptitive lol