...lol
I'm not sure how serious you were being with the vocals in this one. As much as they add to the feel of the song, I felt like they were a little distracting and I couldn't help but laugh at them. ...ok I just heard the cough at the end, I don't think you're too serious with this anymore. lol. Other than that, the song itself is great. Nice rough sound, great balance. Great work.