The song was already rockin, but when the Bill Nye section hits, every kid who went through public school in the 90's and early 00's can't help but get up and shout "BILL! BILL! BILL! BILL!" along with it. XD This is sick, great work man.
The song was already rockin, but when the Bill Nye section hits, every kid who went through public school in the 90's and early 00's can't help but get up and shout "BILL! BILL! BILL! BILL!" along with it. XD This is sick, great work man.
thanks mate! the bill nye was a last minute maneuver, but turned out better better then expected! Thanks for the review!
Nice, easy listening. Your have a great voice, and the guitar is awesome too. Sometimes it's a little hard to make out what the lyrics are, but that will definitely improve with a better mic. The one you used is good, but certainly not the best. The chorus is pretty catchy, once this is recorded more professionally it'll be excellent. Keep workin on it. :D
Yea, I think I needed to play with the mic more. I had the vocals AND guitar in cardioid, but I think I should've done the vocals in stereo. Thanks for listening!
Interesting sound, it puts the image in my head of some ninja doing all sorts of epic things and no one even sees him, haha. It's nice and simplistic with a solid beat. My only advice would be to build it into something bigger, and you could always do a bass drop, but that's up to you. It's pretty good so far, nice work.
Simplicity was my priority, but yes, I could've added some drops and whatnot. Thanks though, I really appreciate the feedback!
- Epickk
Everything is balanced together well. The different chords you used from the original were interesting, but pushed the limit just a bit when the lyrics hit that jazzy off note on the last line and the music doesn't really match up with it quite right. Other than that the piano sounded great, and the beat is solid. Good work, this is a quality remix.
Thanks a lot Robin! Appreciate it!
Very well written. The vocals sound great, the auto-tuning fit very well. The melody is super catchy, which I feel in dubstep can sometimes be more important than the bass. It never gets boring or repetitive. This is some of the best dubstep I've heard in a while. great work.
Thank you for the feedback, I'm glad you enjoyed it :D
very chill.
I'm diggin the percussion in this one, super groovy. :D This makes me want to be somewhere tropical, or at least warm. lol. It gives me the sense of being somewhere else, of having some worldy knowledge. Great work once again.
Thank you mate ^^ Who wouldn't be in a tropical beach right now, haha
KKS
Groovy.
The rhythm and melody are catchy, but the vocals could use some work. They just need to be pronounced a bit more clearly. This song is very chill and I'd like to see you make a longer version. Then I'd like to take it and make a dubstep remix. :D Haha, good work so far.
You could be right with the vocals. I never tried to record vocals before I made this song. I just used the microphone of my headset, maybe I should try the mic I use for piano-recordings. : )
Would you really make a dubstep remix or was it just for fun? PM me! :D
Thank you for the 7!
Calming
It's very easy on the ears, as if it's telling you to just slow down and take a deep breath. The changes in the percussion keep it flowing nicely. The end could use a bit of work, it feels too abrupt. Using that last chord to end it is fine, it just needs a couple more seconds to fade out before the song ends. Good work so far, the only way to learn and get better is to keep working at it.
Heck, I guess the redesign made me forget to check and I just noticed your review! Btw, I highly appreciate that you took the time to listen and comment this stuff, that means a lot to me! I do agree with you about the ending part, that feels just slapped there to gain some additional time because we were tired (due to demo version limitations we couldn't re-open projects after saving and closing) and couldn't think up of anything useful AND appealing to fit in, so we called it a day and accepted it the way it was. Now, i do like it, but I still feel we could have done it a lot better... Boy, better luck next time! Thanks again pal!
Pretty cool so far
What you could try doing is have a halftime, super heavy dub section after that evil laugh. You could also boost the whole song just a little bit, and mix it to bring out some lacking frequencies a little more. Other than that this is a very nice, groovey dubstep song. Good work so far, I'll have to check in to see when you finish it. :D
Thank you! Sounds like a plan! It is really hard for be to boost anything because of the amount of tracks that are used to get the sound. I may be the soundcard I am using which makes it start to distort so I will have to play around with it.
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