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["follow me"]

hmm...

Needs work on the mouth animation. Good job making him move around on beat with the music and lyrics though. And as for the preloader, l'm sure you could find a tutorial on how to do that somewhere around NG.

[experimental flash finish]

It's finished, l know, but it needs work.

The part where the apples fall from the tree and the tree blow up? The apples stay in mid-air and the tree repeats the blowing-up thing. The animation needs to be a bit smoother, with cleaner lines. I don't mean to be rude, but for the finished version, this was a real let-down.

Enlightener57 responds:

The apples were supposed to stay there and you shouldnt vote a 0 because thats not judging it. Thats saying, look i don't know how to give advice and because i can't do a better flash i going to give you a zero. Not cool man.

[Cowboy Toast]

rofl

"I'm callin you out TOAST!!".....He needs to say that. lol.
Pretty good, just a few suggestions.
1.) Tumbleweeds aren't grey, they're usually sum shade of brown.
2.) Needs a bit more build-up. Why is he shooting toast?
3.) Animation just in general needs improvement.

[Stevie And Zoya Part 12]

DAMN

That flash looks pretty good. But wat really amazes me is that there was once a time in this country when you could buy a submarine for FUKIN $6.99!!!!!
WTF??? A 7 FT sub that a little kid could fit inside and drive around underwater?!?!
FOR 7 BUCKS??? Awesome.

[Serious Help Episode 1]

recording quality...

The claymation was pretty good, but the recording quality was bad. It also needs a better story, all we see is two ppl get killed. But the song for the credits is funny.
"I bought a T-shirt and the T-shirt saaaays: I....Like...Pez." lol.

joshuablake responds:

There was no story to begin with.

[G/C004 - Bear Traps]

ROFL

That was hilarious. My only complaint is the lack of any sound (except the gunfire....l think...). But that was a great one, nice work.

[Yoshi`s Aventuras opening]

meh...

idk y ppl keep submitting stuff lyk this saying "oh, this is just the opening for a series im making!!". If it's the opening, then we will see it every time you make a new episode, so y would you submit this at all?
...Although, the music and animation aren't too bad.

[Cunt Coffee]

Needs more colour

l give you one point because the animation kinda goes along with the beat of the music, and the voice of that guy wasn't half bad. However, it's not that funny, and it's not very long either. Needs more of a build-up, and a better story.

Gaizka responds:

Alright, Robin, don't bore me to death. Again.

[A day in the Park with me]

This is bad...

Even for spam, it's bad.....
hmm....improvement, improvement.....
Ah, yes, The little stick figure guy. He just runs in one direction and then repeats. You should have him run back and forth, not just repeating to do the same thing.
And the guy who's just standing there smiling, He should blink once in a while.
I'm sure his eyes must get tired. And maybe a few birds flying around, after all, they are in a park.

5Dollar responds:

Thanks i'll try to do better on my spam.

[A Preview]

rofl

"Acrobatics...Hell, why not?"
Looks lyk it'll be a good one!

8PM responds:

It deserved at LEAST a 4 but oh well
thanks for the review and please take note that im pretty new to animation and the higher frame rate so yeah!