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[CLOCKY 08]

poor.....everything.

you need to work on the sound quality. It sounded like you recorded that song via holding the speaker next to the mic. You know you can download that song to use it right? The animation wasn't great either. So yeah, see if you can dowload the song next time.

kiljoy96 responds:

that was before i had the software to convert mp3 to wav

[Marios People.]

needs work

In the beginning, the lip syncing was way off. animation was pretty good though, but at the end when they all fight, you can see they are standing still under the cloud you drew. But it was pretty funny.

eddythanoob responds:

yeah another review stated that . i'm gonna fix it up a little. thanks

[Dream 404]

nifty.

Although it could have used more color. And really, this turned out great, but dont deprive yourself of sleep just to entertain us. Thats unhealthy. But yeah, this was nifty.

Coddingtown-Reject responds:

Yeah, for the record I don't support deprivation of sleep, but sometimes you just get so caught up in what you're doing you lose track of time. Thanks for the review.

[M&L: Last Brother Trailer]

hmm....

To the video itself (since that is wat i should be rating), l voted low, because its a trailer, you know, and it was kinda slow. But l think the movie that this trailer is describing is going to be really good. I look forward to seeing it.

Hasaxan92 responds:

It is a back story.
Not the story i am going through.
This is just a story that is before the story i am going through.

[Cliff of Sorrow]

bad

Nothing really happens, the sea is yellow for sum reason, and there is no night.
Just sunrise, daytime, and sunset. Srry to sound immature, but with the brown cliff and the yellow ocean...well, l think you know wat l mean.

gnome42 responds:

its not a sea. its a desert.
and should the cliff be gray?

[Helen and Chuck]

other than how annoying that is....

I gave you points for making the song, but took them away again for the animation.
The girl and the mouse only move their eyes, arms, and mouths. it needs more motion, more creativity. And it's only the one scene the entire time, why not show mr. cheese out in the arcade or sumthin? While they are singing they look totally expressionless. They are singing a song about FUN right? They should look happy.

VMKMASTER responds:

I didn't make the song. And it's kinda about the robots but I can put something on the screen.

[Lip Synching Tutorial]

helpful

l dont have the programming to even make a flash, but l think this will be helpful to other ppl. however, that link at the end to a little flash you did, that flash is kinda pointless. just a spinning head. but thats not the point. this was good.

dancem789 responds:

Yah, the spinning head was pointless, but I just thought some people would like to watch a head pointlessly spin.

[6 Death Short]

even for a short it was short.

It was too short, and the fight didn't have any complexity to it. l gave points for the music selection and was a little merciful since you used a new program. 2/10, 1/5.

Bloodspill234 responds:

Thank you for your feedback.

[Scholar Work]

so true......

god i hate it when that happens......
anyway, l dont think there was enough build-up to the end. l felt that it needed more scenes where he gets distracted, or maybe his hand cramps up. pretty good animation, but overall l say 5/10, 2/5.

Rike19 responds:

Yeah thanks for the review and the hints, i will try to work better in the next!!!

[Blob doesn't care]

I could say a lot of things.....

but Blob wouldn't care. I gave a point because I think that once you get good at flash and stuff, you could go back to this and make a few episodes of how Blob simply doesn't care. But as far as the little animation here itself, if you weren't just using this for a test, I would give 0. So 1 point for u.

Dimanti-San responds:

I am kinda surprised it didn't get blammed, so I really doubt there will be some episodes of blob, but we'll see and...

BLOB DOESN"T CARE!!! :D